Dolby

Hi, this is looking really good. The Front cover is effective and there is a clear house style- nice image. Contents is easy to read and on the whole laid out quite well but I would consider font type for the descriptions of articles as it is weak/pale and hard to read, making there look like there's a lot of blank space. Make sure you have a range of shot types and distances across your 4 images. A little work to do on the double page spread. I would make sure there is a strapline/heading to your article as this would help explain the image. It could be a pull quote. Maybe a caption for the image would also help with how the left hand reads.