I think your pictures across all three pieces are very successful. The front cover image isn't the expected choice as it isn't mid-shot and doesn't have the artist giving eye contact but it is fairly successful- perhaps try experimenting here. Check the colours of fonts are clear and you need price and date- this is a must. A little sparse so consider adding a little more.
Contents is most successful- interesting use of layout array of images. You must follow codes and conventions and add page numbers- go back to real media artefacts. Look at alignment of text and captions for images.
Double page needs work- add in your text asap.
Check branding- the masthead has a red line except for front cover.
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