Monday 24 March 2014

Feedback From Teacher With Check List 3rd Update (with extra notes)

  • Think about the size of the page numbers on the contents.
  • Alignment of the text across all 3 pages.
  • You also need to work on the front cover - cropping of image, and cover lines coming off the side. 


  • The text has been brought in on the sides and so is no longer cut offs/ almost falling off the page.
  • Colour changes to text in order for it to stand out more and be easily read when on the shelf.
  • Logo re-sized to stand out more.
  • Puff has been shrunk so it doesn't outstand the logo.
  •  Re-aligned the text so it all fits into columns and doesn't look 'wonky' or 'out of place'.
  • Re-sized the page numbers so the most important is largest, then size decreases as it gets further away from the main feature.
  • Did a little re-sizing on the other platform logos (twitter, Facebook, Instagram...) as they seemed wonky and needed re-doing.
  • Added in the "apparently I did" pull quote so there wasn't a gap.
  • Double checked alignments to make sure it was all slick and correct.
  • Did a little re-sizing on the other platform logos (twitter, Facebook, Instagram...) as they seemed wonky and needed re-doing.

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