Evalution Update

I have been updating my evaluation on the existing post, so far I have completed the following;

10/04/2014;

Question 2 - "You've misunderstood this- representation is how people are portrayed- are you showing band members to be hedonistic, attractive and quirky for example and how have you shown this through language, dress etc. You can link to audience but how they are PRESENTED in your mag. "

Question 3 - "Add in where you would place your mag- where on the shelf would it sit alongside others? How would it be distributed? what mags does this institution distribute already? "

18/04/2014;

Question 4/5 - "You have most of the key info here but consider how you DID address/attract audience not future tense as it's already made! I'm not sure this form of presenting the answer is that user-friendly. Refine it or break up the answers for clarity"

23/04/2014;

Question 7 - "This is a good overview but needs to be more specific with what you've learnt and show the prelim to allow us to see that progression clearly."

Question 1 - "Sarah, there is a good basis here but the expression needs a lot of work and you misuse terminology in places- refine the definition of codes and conventions- only focus on print based media as camera etc isn't too relevant. Make sure that you are rooting the answer mostly in your product rather than a general overview of what codes and conventions are. Pics of your RMA alongside others would be good."

28/04/2014;

Question 6 - "Sarah, Popplet works a little better here. This needs serious proofreading! Also, don't forget the hardware you used too- the pictures you used and in fact all the technology used at all 3 stages of the coursework."